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Post by Zagham on Jul 16, 2008 13:17:29 GMT 6
bukhsh lail puri k 2 asshar mujhy bohot pasand hain .umeed hay aap ko bhi pasand aain gay
nok-zaba'n pe khar ko rakhna para mujhay
apnay lahoo ka zaiqa chakhna para mujhay
guzray wo sanahay miri qud avari sath
be qamatoo'n k samnay jhukna para mujhay
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Post by Zagham on Jul 16, 2008 23:27:31 GMT 6
doosray shair main kuch spelling mistake ho gae hay. main dono'n asshar dobara likh raha hoo'n
nok-e-zaba'n pe khar ko rakhna para mujhay
apnay lahoo ka zaiqa chukhna para mujhay
guzray wo sanahay miri qud aaveri ke sath
be qamato'n ke samnay jhukna para mujhay
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Post by Sania Sajjad on Jul 22, 2008 2:12:04 GMT 6
Dr Sb samajh nahin ayee bax sb kay ashaar ki, ghalati unhoN ne ki ya aap kay likhnay maiN hai ya phir hamari samajh maiN. Baraay karam yeh nukta wazeh kar dain.
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Post by Zagham on Jul 25, 2008 13:15:16 GMT 6
mairy khayal main to asshar wazahy hain. agar ghalati hay to mujhay samjh nahin aa rahi. aatif sahab hi kuch rahnumai karain
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Post by Bilal Mirza on Jul 26, 2008 21:41:58 GMT 6
Gurbar iss misray kay red lafz maiN hai!maiN hai.
guzray wo sanahay miri qud aaveri ke sath
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